I'd like to submit my story for Critique

kazalene · Sun Sep 21, 2008 5:19 pm by kazalene

Title: Love Is Noise

Link: This is it.

Rating: T

Length: One chapter, 3110 words.

Summary: Calleigh does some daydreaming.

AOB: CSI:Miami, between seasons 6 and 7. Eric/Calleigh pairing.

Personal: Um, I'm really just submitting this for the hell of it, to be honest. Any feedback is welcome.

racefh853629 · Sun Sep 28, 2008 8:32 pm by racefh853629

Title: The Ghost of You

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3881928/1/The_Ghost_of_You

Rating: T

Length: 6 chapters, 10,236 words

Summary: After being beat up by the gang and accidentally killing Demitrius James, Greg gets an unusual companion...

AOB: Season 7 Vegas/Season 5 Miami. Canon couples (although I don't think there's really any romance to it...)

Personal: Anything and everything.

adorelo · Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:54 pm by adorelo

Title: Through a mirror, darkly

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4511161/1/T ... ror_darkly

Rating: T

Length: 3074

Summary: He'd seem so much darkness, he was more than ready for the light. If it ever came.

Mainly Eric character study (my initial aim) but with splashings of EC angst/romance... kinda

AOB: There's something that's not right with this one... and I don't know what it is... It's just... blah... ger.. Haha.

lostladyknight · Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:58 am by lostladyknight

You have no idea how good it makes me feel to see you requesting a feature.

I've missed your stuff so much!

Amanda_Ruth · Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:29 pm by Amanda_Ruth

Title: Crazy Dreams and Wedding Days

Link: This is it

Rating: K+

Length: 2 chapters, 9,829 words

Summary: First chapter is the wackiness that I believe Luke and Lorelai's wedding day would turn out to be. The second chapter is what I believe SHOULD happen with the whole 'who should Rory end up with' problem.

AOB: Set about a year or two after the finale of Gilmore Girls. Java Junkie and Literati are the pairings.

Personal: Continuity. I wanna know if everything flowed. And basically just tell me what you thought of it and cover the bases you deem necessary!

OK, I know this was my challenge story, and racefh did a wonderful critique of it, but there are just so many things that I'm not comfortable with in this story. I want to know what can be improved. And to LLK, racefh doesn't have to critique if she wants to be featured, if that's OK with you. I think it's only fair, since she already critiqued it.

peaceloverainbow · Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:17 pm by peaceloverainbow

Title: Phone Call

Link: http://slasherfersure.livejournal.com/20615.html

Rating: PG-13

Length: 621

Summary: Follow-up to another fic (the link is in the header in the entry). The Joker makes a little follow-up phone call.

AOB: It's set sometime after The Dark Knight ends and is under presumption that the Joker did not die. The pairing is Batman/Joker, but in more of an enemy-like way.

Personal: I'm a little unsure about the characterization.

Giorgia · Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:55 am by Giorgia

Hope this isn't too late!! Sorry about that...

Title: Plagued

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4582633/1/Plagued

Rating: K+

Length: One chapter: 2,959 words

Summary: Danny has some trouble ignoring his thoughts about his partner. Martin isn't doing much to help.

AOB: (what does AOB stand for, by the way?) Without a Trace (Danny/Martin). My... third WAT story. Set whenever.

Personal: Any feedback would be awesome. I'm easy.

marymagdalen · Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:39 pm by marymagdalen

Hi Giorgia.

Giorgia wrote:(what does AOB stand for, by the way?)

AOB stands for "Any Other Business" - usually found at the end of meeting agenda. It gives people a chance to flag up anything that hasn't been or won't be covered by the rest of the agenda. OK?

You're welcome!

Leni

lostladyknight · Mon Nov 24, 2008 4:35 am by lostladyknight

I think we're all caught up on features. (I think.)

So, I'm requesting my own fic.

Joy.

To Rise Above and Beat It

Giorgia · Mon Nov 24, 2008 4:49 am by Giorgia

Thank you, Leni!!

I just tried to explain 'avatars' to my dad. Phew! I if drank, I would probably want a scotch.

Amanda_Ruth · Tue Nov 25, 2008 3:04 am by Amanda_Ruth

Title: Whatever You Say

Link: *points up at title*

Rating: T-ish

Length: 1 Chapter, 697 Words

Summary: How House standing outside of Cuddy's place could have ended.

AOB: Pairing is obviously House/Cuddy, despite the fact that I'm a Wilson/Cuddy shipper at heart. I don't know what else to say.

peaceloverainbow · Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:23 am by peaceloverainbow

I come with another fic. (:

Title: Untitled

Link: http://slasherfersure.livejournal.com/36245.html

Rating: PG-13

Length: 1 chapter ; 512 words.

Summary: Severus muses on Lily & the Death Eaters on Christmas Break in his seventh year.

AOB: 1979 ; Harry Potter ; Severus/Lily

Personal: Hahah, this was just a short little... thing I wrote. It took me only about twenty minutes, so it probably isn't that good, but whatever, I like it.

racefh853629 · Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:50 am by racefh853629

Title: Tangled
Link: This is it

Rating: PG-13
Length: Right now, it's 5 chapters and 8000 words, but I may end up updating before it's featured, so it could be longer.
Summary: With life, some things fall into place while some things fall apart. The team struggles through a lot of things, usiing each other to lean on the entire time as everyone has a story. Eventual character death, ships to be revealed later on. (I swear, I don't always kill people in my stories...)
AOB: CSI:NY, starts in Veritas and goes from there. Up to posted date, there are no real ships, just flirtations.
Personal: I'm open for any feedback

Giorgia · Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:56 am by Giorgia

Title: Shotgun

Link: See above.

Rating: K+. Probably equates to a PG, or something...

Summary: Another Danny/Martin fic. Martin and Danny spend some (very confusing) time together.

AOB (now that I know what it means): Mostly an exercise in sexual tension and mixed signals. Complete.

Miiztaylor · Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:44 pm by Miiztaylor

Title: Scared Into the Light

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4688081/1/S ... _the_Light

Rating: T (It hasn't completly presented itself yet.)

Length: 2 chapters, 4,872 word count.

Summary: Someone is sending Catherine letters and he/she really wants to talk and she is getting nervous.

AOB: The fandom is CSI: It is set a few days after Catherine confesses her fanticies to Warrick. I don't want to get to far into the pairing(s) I have chosen, but they are most likely evident.

Personal: I'm trying to write mystery, but I want to focus on the details. I seem to have trouble doing that. The first chapter is a little choppy, but bare with me, the second is better than it.

I'd like to submit my story for Critique

I WANTS TO BE FEATURED!

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