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Challenge #8


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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:35 am

Challenge #8

The Rules: *please see the site main page for any extra information on rules.*

1. Everyone is allowed to participate.
2. You will have until Saturday to write your piece.
3. IF you write a piece and submit it to me you MUST critique next week. No exceptions.
4. When you've written your piece please PM me a link to it. (And that means here on the FCG. You can't PM links on ff.net... please don't try.)
5. Next week I'll assign everyone who has written a piece someone else's to critique.
6. Have fun!
7. No challenge element is set in stone, but don't bend it TOO much.
8. Can be written for ANY fandom you so choose, so have fun with it!



First:

Pick two lyrics from the following. Make a post in this thread saying which you've chosen. I'll edit the list as frequently as possible and strike through ones that have been used. No two people can choose the same lyrics so be mindful of what has already been chosen and please read posts before yours in case I miss something.

Once you've selected your lyrics use them in writing your story. Please don't ask me how I want you to use them or if what you're doing is okay. As long as you are using them, you're right.

(And yes I'm aware they're abstract.)

3...2...1....Pick!


“It's all worked out, my road is clear.”
[s]“It's in ourselves to rise or fall.”[/s]
[s]“There will be a time for mourning.”[/s]
[s]“You've never seen my face.”[/s]
[s]“To see the secrets so few eyes have seen.”[/s]
[s]“The moments when we smile and those between.”[/s]
[s]“It's knowing what they want that scares me.”
“A picture of true happiness.”[/s]
[s]“And who'd have thought that love could be so good?”[/s]
[s]“How an affair of the heart survives days apart and hurried nights.”[/s]
[s]“I could wait forever for the perfect time and place.”[/s]
[s]“We don't know whose words are true.”[/s]
[s]“One more longing backward glance.”[/s]
[s]“Always half a step behind.”[/s]
[s]“I'm in every kind of trouble.”[/s]
[s]“You can't escape your genes.”[/s]
[s]“Evil's a distinctive smell.”[/s]
[s]“I'm sorry for the things I've said; and the things I forgot to say, too.”[/s]
[s]“We're given paradise but only for a day.”[/s]
[s]“You're all I'll ever want but this I am denied.”[/s]
[s]“How did I throw half a lifetime away?”[/s]
[s]“I learned it a little too late.”[/s]
“Wild ambitions in our sights.”
[s]“May this confession be the start.”[/s]
[s]“And no horizon we shall not pursue.”[/s]

(I'll not post my choices until Monday day to be "fair.")


Okay... now that you've chosen your lyrics you're ready to start writing. So, without further ado I'm going to present you with the rest of the challenge.

1. Must include the phrase “I just don't know.” Or the phrase “Shake it like a polaroid picture.”
2. Must be between 990 and 9,990 words.
3. May be any rating greater than K+ and less than MA.
4. Must involve a fight. Interpret at will (as always).
5. Must involve a secret. (Optional.)


Please make a post in this thread letting the rest of us know which lyrics you're going to write for. You have one week to write your piece so, everyone have fun and start submitting to me as soon as you have something finished!

I won't be accepting any late pieces this time. Sorry if you're used to me letting you finish up at the last minute. Pieces not received by 12 AM EST on Sunday, April 5, 2009 won't be accepted. (Work written by myself included.)

Have fun everybody and thank you! I can't wait to start reading fanfics! And don't forget if you submit one you're required to critique during the week of the 5th!


Thanks gain!

-LLK
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:49 am

My choices for lyrics:

“To see the secrets so few eyes have seen.”

“I'm sorry for the things I've said; and the things I forgot to say, too.”

This one sounds exciting. :D Can't wait!
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 5:03 am

“Always half a step behind.”

“You can't escape your genes.”

Please? I'm loving this challenge already! I'm stoked!
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 5:07 am

Here are my choice for lyrics:

"You've never seen my face"

and

"The moments when we smile and those between"

This one looks great! :D
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 5:26 am

I'm glad to have you all so intrigued!

If it starts looking like we need more lyrics I'll put some more up. I have a whole library of resources to pull them from. I thougt that enough for 12 players was enough though. I hope I was wrong!

I'm very excited about this one!
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:13 pm

Can I have "Evil is a distinctive smell" and "I'm in every kind of trouble"? I really want to add 'for five hundred, Alex' to the end of that (not entirely sure why), but I will restrain myself. Now I wanna know where these lyrics are from.
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:27 pm

Ooo, challenge week! It's been a while since I've done one of these...

For my lyrics, I'd like "May this confession be the start" and "And who'd have thought that love could be so good".

Let's see what comes out of that....
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:36 pm

Okay, I'm back. I hate that I've been neglecting this site and, therefore, resolve to write this challenge.

Ohh pick a lyric? Umm... okay, this one:
“How an affair of the heart survives days apart and hurried nights.”
and this one:
“We don't know whose words are true.”
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:36 pm

One more longing backward glance.

AND

I could wait forever for the perfect time and place.

Hehe... I can't wait to attempt something.
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:37 pm

Uuhhhhh Zelda you took mine! Both of them! I'm excited to see how differently your idea is going to turn out than mine!

:-)

Okay I'm going to pick now.

“We're given paradise but only for a day.”

and

“You're all I'll ever want but this I am denied.”
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:07 pm

Can I trade one of mine? I've been writing my fic and am almost done, but realized that one of the quotes didn't fit as well as I'd hoped. If I'm allowed to switch, I'd like to trade 'Evil is a distinctive smell' for 'A picture of true happiness'.
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:43 pm

lostladyknight wrote:Uuhhhhh Zelda you took mine! Both of them! I'm excited to see how differently your idea is going to turn out than mine!

:-)


They say that great minds think alike... :wink:



I've already started working on it...and I think it will be very different. If I get on my horse (and my Stats project isn't too difficult), you might even see it before Saturday. :mrgreen:
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 5:20 pm

happyharper13 wrote:Can I trade one of mine? I've been writing my fic and am almost done, but realized that one of the quotes didn't fit as well as I'd hoped. If I'm allowed to switch, I'd like to trade 'Evil is a distinctive smell' for 'A picture of true happiness'.


No, I'm sorry. I put a lot of thought into this in the couple of weeks I'd been planning it before posting and I decided against trading.

I hope that's not too inconvenient.



And yes Zelda, great minds do think alike! I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve!
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:19 pm

I am going to do this one!

"I learned it a little too late."

and

"And no horizon we shall not pursue."

I will take this on, give it my all, and I will see you guys when it is time to turn in!
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Post Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:34 pm

Yay!

I'm really excited for this challenge now! Lots of fantastic writers already signed up and we're only one day in.
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