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Challeng Exchange Review Thread


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Post Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:25 am

Challeng Exchange Review Thread

Post stories that you've written for the Challenge Exchange here.

Also post any reviews you'd like to leave here also.

Thanks!
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Post Thu Jan 22, 2009 5:06 am

I'm the first one to do one?! Yay. This if for Taylor's challenge, I believe.

Here you go!
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Post Fri Jan 23, 2009 2:51 am

Review for Agian

Thank you for choosing my challenge!

I like your style, the whole with out the text thing. Also that it was him, almost, rationaling with himself, only to come to the conclusion that he was okay with the way things were.

I couldn't find anything wrong with it or anything omiting the challenge guidelines.

Very nice job. Lots of big words. The dictionary is my new best friend.
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Post Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:30 am

Thanks! Eh, 'twas fun to write, what with no dialogue and all. It's always fun to deviate from your usual writing style.

And yes, there comes a time in every girl's life when some things change. You start growing some things, and having some new feelings, and using the dictionary more than one ever should have to. *grins*
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